2023 Mayor's Writing Competition
Carroll College students attained some tremendous results in this year’s Mayor’s Writing Competition. The competition had a record number of participants who were required to compose a creative response on the topic of “Change”.
Stage Four Student Awards:
Neve Smart – Special Mention, Katalin Patyus – Encouragement Award, and Michaela Fitzpatrick – Runner-up.
Stage Five Student Awards:
Bronte Eppelstun – Runner-up, Charli Alvey – Encouragement Award, Reis Gaspari-Nicholls – Special Mention, Richard Allen – Special Mention.
Stage Six Awards:
Katie Tegel – Winner, Sophie Eppelstun – Runner-up, Joshua Smart – Encouragement Award
Congratulations to these students on their imaginative writing exploits.
Stephen Knight
English Coordinator
Ava in the New City
Ava stood on a busy street corner, taking in the vibrant city that surrounded her. As she watched people rush by, each with their own hopes, dreams, and struggles, she couldn't ignore the significant transformations happening right before her eyes. Society was evolving, adapting to new ideas and values. Technology has intertwined itself with people's lives. Relationships had grown into complex, tangled webs within the confusion. Ava found herself reflecting on her own life and its place in this packed world.
Navigating through the crowded streets, an epiphany struck her like a bolt of lightning: life wasn't just a series of random events. Instead, it was a delicate dance between her decisions, the vast universe around her, and the inner power she possessed. But Ava didn't stop at contemplation, she actively engaged with the world around her. She conversed with strangers, learning about their dreams and stories. Their words carried weight and emotion as she listened attentively. Each interaction left an everlasting mark on Ava's soul, reinforcing her belief that empathy and compassion were not mere ideals but mighty forces for change.
Driven by this newfound understanding, Ava embarked on a quest for self-discovery. She devoured books, seeking wisdom and knowledge that would fuel her personal growth. She journaled, reflecting on her thoughts and beliefs, uncovering the essence of her true self. She sought out mentors, individuals whose experiences and perspectives would guide her on this transformative journey. With every step she took, Ava infused her actions with intention. She made conscious decisions aligned with her values, taking small yet impactful steps to create positive change in the world. It was not always easy, but she embraced the challenges and setbacks, knowing they were opportunities for growth and resilience.
As Ava continued to traverse the lively city streets, she did so with purpose. She no longer saw herself as a mere spectator but as an active participant in the symphony of existence. Each interaction and each choice she made contributed to the ever-evolving narrative of her life. With determination in her eyes and a heart brimming with possibility, Ava embraced the flux of the world, embracing her own power to shape her destiny and leave an imprint on the lives she touched.
Katie Tegel (Year 11)